Pitch and feedback

This is a video of Lauren Jackett, Charlie Woollard and I, giving our pitch to the class. We did this in order to gain productive feedback so that when creating our final film we have an idea of what we need to do to gain better marks, and give the overall look of the film a more professional look.

I found the feedback we recieved very helpful and productive from our class. We discovered that the majority fo the class enjoyed the sample scene and the idea for our film, and also liked the outcome of the sample scene. We recieved alot of positive feedback, for instance, it was said that our music was put in really well within our sample scene and the editing was really smooth. Because of this we will continue to work as we have with the music and editing when creating our final film.
However, we also recieved critical feedback, which meant we knew exactly what we needed to change or ajust when creating our final film. It was said that the outdoor part of the film was too dark and needed to be brighter for all viewers to make out what is going on. We found this very helpful as it meant we knew that we either needed to get hold of some lights or use final cut express effects to brighten the outdoor clips. We found the overall pitch productive and helpful and it gave us alot of insight of things we needed to add/change for our final film.